We should read: this huge animal, who has...
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We should read: Rather, it is...

There was a twitch that happened, but its not like any normal twitch that would make one side of your face feel pain. Rather, its something big that proves that this huge animal, who have the power to devour the two kids in that car have practiced restraint, giving a warning.

We should read: that he seems...

By the time that he came back inside their car, the male alpha decided to leave his spot that he seem to have liked. He looked like he’s kind of ******, but sulking that he had to give it up. But after that uproar (literally) the lioness is not having it and had to leave her spot for good. And that means that this male lion had to follow suit.