Phrasing of sentence
In the article (Australian charged over ****, murder of 2-year-old) the sentence below could have been better phrased.
A man was Friday charged with the **** and murder of a two-year-old Australian girl, allegedly attacking her over a 20-minute period when her mother was out of the house.
A man was charged on Friday with the **** and murder of a two-year-old Australian girl, allegedly attacking her over a 20-minute period when her mother was out of the house.
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