Would you please hire an editor!?
"Editorial Feedback" is that you desperately need an editor. Your headlines and many of the paragraphs within each article are so poor as to disgrace you as "journalists." Punctuation problems, incomplete sentences, and run-ons are rampant throughout. Some sentences are so poorly constructed as to be unintelligible! A good editor simply doesn't cost that much.
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