Improve writing style
Hi Andy Serwer, I like you and the Yahoo finance team. However I have a pet peeve regarding spme of the writing. I'm all for outsourcing the writing to your Indian partners. But can someone from here in the US please check their writing not just for grammatical mistakes but also style? See below:
"Should You Hold Stanley Black & Decker (SWK)?
Soumya Eswaran
December 3, 2022·2 min read"
"Ariel Investments, an investment management company, released its “Ariel Appreciation Fund” third-quarter investor letter. A copy of the same can be downloaded here"
A copy of "the same"? Do your Indian writers know of pronouns such as "it" or "thereof"? Even just "a copy" would have sufficed. Sorry to bring a pet-peeve of mine to your attention. The style just grates on me.
